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Type of Document Dissertation
Author Byrd, Brigitte
URN etd-09212003-185934
Title Fence Above The Sea
Degree Doctor of Philosophy
Department English, Department of
Advisory Committee
Advisor Name Title
David Kirby Committee Chair
S.E. Gontarski Committee Member
Sheila Ortiz-Taylor Committee Member
William Cloonan Committee Member
Keywords
  • A Collection Of Prose Poems
Date of Defense 2003-08-02
Availability unrestricted
Abstract
“Fence above the Sea” is a collection of prose poems written in sequences.

Writing in the line of Emily Dickinson, Gertrude Stein, and Lynn Hejinian, I experiment with

language and challenge its convention.

While Dickinson writes about “the landscape of the soul,” I write about the landscape of the mind. While she appropriates and juxtaposes words in a strange fashion, I juxtapose fragments of sentences in a strange fashion. While she uses dashes to display silence, I discard punctuation, which is disruptive and limits the reader to a set reading of the sentence. Except for the period.

Stein’s writing is the epitome of Schklovsky’s concept of ostranenie (defamiliarization).

Like her poems in Tender Buttons, my poems present a multiplied perspective. On the moment.

Like Stein, I write dialogical poems where there is a dialogue among words and between words

and their meanings. Also, I expect a dialogue between words and readers, author and readers,

text and readers. My prose poems focus on sentences “with a balance of their own. . . the

balance of space completely not filled but created by something moving as moving is not as

moving should be” (Stein, “Poetry and Grammar”). Repetitions are essential in everyday life, to

the thought process, and thus in this collection.

Like Stein, language poets are exponents from ostranenie, and the results are flatness of

tone, experimentation with syntax, and decontextualization of words. I work within the same parameters. Also, I am making a political statement with this collection by asking the reader to be active and react to the text instead of being fed a poetry that is made a commodity for

consumption. I particularly agree with Hejinian’s aesthetics and poetics: “the ‘open text’ often

emphasizes or foregrounds process. . . and thus resists the cultural tendencies that seek to

identify and fix material and turn it into a product” (Hejinian, The Language of Inquiry). Each

poem from “Fence above the Sea” is an experiment with the thought that each sentence is a story

and that a poem is an open text which is the mind.

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